Harry Potter for the adult

Submitted by: Josie875 13 years ago Misc
http://pages.nyu.edu/~amw243/fiction/fic/lori_pou_01.html

This is a more matured version of the famous Harry Potter books.
There are 51 comments:
Female 286
Search It In Google For Lori Stone, That Was The Author.
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Female 422
Wait, how do you find it?
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Female 286
I dunno, i`m trying to find it. I can`t remember what its called either.
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Female 95
Oh, man. I can get on it. it comes up with the `Page not found` thing. Is there any other sites with it on?
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Female 286
Um whats with the name and age? DanRsFan?
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Female 286
Omg that was gr8!!! wow i loved it
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Female 4
I love the novles that are added to and spiced up, altough I didn`t read any of the other books it was a very nice experience.I started to cry when Hermione "died" and when Harry found out she really wasnt dead and didnt really belive it was acctually her after being hurt so badly.All I have to say is wow and I hope Josie writes a follow up to this one.
Love always,
Shannon Cote, 12
P.S.There are some spotes where two or three words need to be seperated and there are some spelling mistakes,It made it harder to read.
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Female 4
Oh My god. That was the most beautiful, and inspiring peice of writing I have ever laid my eyes on. It was incredible! It took me almost fifteen hours to finish it but it was worth it! Plus I was trying to win a reading contest at school so I`m sure i won with 960 minutes total!
I really didn`y get why Harry and Hermione had picked up swing danceing but it did add to make it one catchy story!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love always,
Shannon Cote,12
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Female 533
harry...hermione...swing dancing?
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Female 533
^^ h-hr...?
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Male 1,079
I guess I`ll give it a try..
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Female 1
THAT WAS REALLI GOOD!!!! im not a h-hr fan but.....yea it was still good:-D
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Male 982
pretty cool
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Female 73
it was really good, i tried finishing it, i really did, but its been like 3 hours and i cant think straight anymore! :-/ damn i hope i remember to finish it later
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Male 37
New chapter just been posted. :-D
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Female 7
i finished at home i couldnr be bothered dialing up so i cut and pasted all the chapters, oh by the way its not rude or anithern its just characters are adults now not kids animore. i liked da order of da phoenix but i dont like da fact dat sirius dies!!!!!!
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Male 37
Just finished the second. It is even better than the first one by this author. Harry Potter:Show That Never Ends
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Male 37
Thi is actually the first part of a Trilogy of Harry Potter books set as they are adults. I am almost finished the second one.
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Male 26
Harry will never make it to adulthood...
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Male 37
It is adult because it is set when they are adults.
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Female 75
pretty good!!!
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Female 190
What makes it so adult? I couldn`t read it. I tried to read a little, and it hurt my eyes.
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Male 37
I finished it in several hours and it is pretty damn good.
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Male 276
I just finished it and it`s f*cking great.
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Female 51
Yea, exactly. Ooooooooh, I`m only on chapter 12. Oh, it really should be longer. :-P
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Female 112
Exactly, Josie. I mean, I liked it, but they could have been written better. Anyway, I loved this story, it was awesome!
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Female 51
He was just so.. Ugh, complainy. Angsty. Annoying. Bleh.
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Female 142
This is awesome. I read the Order in three days because it would bother the HECK outta me if I didn`t finish it, but yeah, it`s boring. -reads-
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Male 276
Order sucked big donkey balls
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Female 51
Order SUCKED! I didn`t like it at all. I`m only on Chapter 7. My eyes hurt.
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Male 276
So I have 4 chapters to go,hahaha,this is even better than the order of the pheonix
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Female 51
Good :-X
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Female 112
YOU SHOULD BE. ;-) You know I still love you...:):-X Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Female 51
I`m sorry! *sobs*
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Female 112
Man, Josie...screwed it all up, didn`t ya...and I thought there was going to be some hardcore stuff! Man!
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Female 51
There are 15 chapters.. By the way. And up there, I screwed up. This isn`t the adult version, this is the version where they are adults. It`s not porn, I was tired, I screwed up. Sorry.
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Male 276
Crap,this sh*t is depressing.
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Male 276
Dammit,im a slow ass reader
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Female 112
This is pretty cool, I`m on five.
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Male 276
Damn,im only on chapter 2
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Male 1,031
4 chapters so far.
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Male 276
Wow,this is really really good,I think I might finish it,I hope it isn`t too long
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Male 1,031
Me neither.
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Male 276
I just made the font really huge to read it better,I don`t understand the "adult" part yet,but Im sure it will come
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Male 1,031
I`m having trouble so far understanding what makes it "adult".
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Male 1,031
Me too, Captain.
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Female 131
I read some of it and its pretty interesting
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Male 276
Dammit,I really wanna read that,but I hate reading off of screans:-(
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Male 1,031
How many chapters does this thing have?
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Female 440
What is this like porn or something? Im not a fan of potter and Im a afreaid to open the link.
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Female 51
Link: Harry Potter for the adult [Rate Link] - This is a more matured version of the famous Harry Potter books.

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